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    Please give feedback on the first chapter of my novel?

    Thank you for all the input! I'm not 100% satisfied with this chapter, so I see where you're coming from. Definitely going to go back and rewrite at some point.
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    Please give feedback on the first chapter of my novel?

    I totally agree! I normally would have, but I was being impatient and just wanted to get it posted. That will be the next chapter, for sure.
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    Please give feedback on the first chapter of my novel?

    Hi! I just put up the first chapter of my first novel. I'm a little unsure about it, so I would greatly appreciate any feedback on it! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/68784/the-sunset-aspect/
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