Recent content by Neemsay

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    New writer, need feedback.

    i understand what you did there. i can still understand the scene even without all that extra information. i'll try that too. thank you very much for the pointer.
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    New writer, need feedback.

    I know it was a mistake on my part. My thread was not showing the first two times and i didn't get the notification saying my thread is being reviewed. i only got that notification the third time and all three thread showed at the same time. i did try to take two of them down but since i am...
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    New writer, need feedback.

    Hi guys, i am new on the platform and have updated 3 chapters so far. I would love to get some feedbacks on my story. critiques are most welcome. The Echoes of Forgotten | Scribble Hub
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