Recent content by Naolin_Sicaru

Thanks so much for feedback Sir hans Yes i struggled a lot with that first paragraph, I changed it a lot of times and its still wonky. I am definitely going to work on it to make it clearer. I also just noticed the random changes in present and past tenses thanks to you, I will try my best...

Hello everyone, im writing my first ever novel and i need some opinions on it, so far it only has 4 chapters but you don't need to read all of them, even reading the first chapter would be much appreciated Mainly my concerns are regarding about pacing, I'm not sure if my pacing is too slow or is...