Recent content by N3fari0n

I have started posting in Scribble Hub since 11th March. And I have posted 14 chapters so far. I have a little over 4k page views. I have no idea whether that's a good number or not. So, I don't know whether I am bragging or not by telling this. But here's what I saw. 1. Continuity is...

First of all, thank you so much for reading my story. Honestly, I was expecting something far worse, as I have seen others get obliterated to quarks in this thread. I agree with your points. I feel progression fantasy or litRPG as a genre is still not part of mainstream fantasy writing and is...

It would be an honor to be roasted by you. There is no need to hold back. I can take it (I think?). https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1478722/ascension-of-the-dark-prince

Thank you. You could not have said it better. A switch of perception or viewpoint works when the transition is smooth, there is less back and forth. In the novels I read, if the viewpoint changes between more than three to four characters, I immediately lose interest. That being said, I think...

The stereotypes of Dwarves are as follows. 1. They usually have lesser height and more muscle mass than normal humans. 2. They are usually hairy and like to flaunt their beards or mustaches. Sometimes, even females have beards. 3. In fantasy tropes, they are usually portrayed as blacksmiths or...

Thank you so much for your feedback. I will correct/improve the areas you have mentioned. There are a few things I would like to clarify 1. Allicia is a typo. I will correct it. 2. Alicia is not the MC, but the story does evolve around her. More of her backstory will come soon. 3. I have...

HI Everyone, This is my first time writing something like this. I would love your honest opinion. Feel free to roast me as much as you want. I will take it positively, as I want to improve my writing. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1478722/ascension-of-the-dark-prince/