I've been writing this story for a while now, and I'd like some people's honest thoughts on it. It is a romance/drama story set in university. I would love to discuss my story with you, what you think was done well, what was done poorly and how it could be better.
I recommend reading the pdf if...
If you have time getting some feedback would be much appreciated!
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/493460/anamihikiru--the-soft-spoken-girl-next-door-wont-be-denied/