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Same, and post time for a new chapter is coming up. I guess that's what I get for not scheduling.

Awesome I'll have a look at them

The Mc that dies in a last ditch fight or betrayed by a close friends and travels back in time to the day were he just applies to magic school /swordsman school/temple. Or the male mc that can't seem to keep his pheromones in check.

Might as well post mine here. Let me know what you think, still somewhat new to writing hopefully some improvement from my last edits. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/522135/echoes-of-the-lost-age/

I see very insightful.

I am assuming you only read the prologue, so ill discuss that. If not, let me know ill try to clarify what I can. Ill mostly give my intentions when writing this. Hopefully, this can help you help me. Yes, my intention was to start off with a catastrophe hook, although my initial intention was...

Thinking about going back to update all my chapters once the first arc is done, it will be great to know what I did wrong in my first chapter. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/522135/echoes-of-the-lost-age/

Have a look at mine, I have no prior writing experience so don't expect much. Looking to fix earlier chapters. If you can, let me know if there are any improvements in later chapters if only a little. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/522135/echoes-of-the-lost-age/

Thank you for the feedback. Regarding the example you pointed out, so a better way to put it would be she wakes up, we explain her location, then we move on to the kitchen. There should be context before any new concept is introduced? You said that this was my primary issue. Is there anything...

This is my first long running novel. Would love your feedback. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/522135/echoes-of-the-lost-age/