Recent content by Mono_Artist

Hey, thanks for the feedback! It's definitely a work in progress, trying to elevate my writing in all (I'm glad people can look at this and be interested though and not see the previous iterations) I would like to say "There's a reason for the tonal shifts" because, well, I do have a reason for...

Now, I won't claim this is "an amazing life changing read" or even say it's good. But, I like the direction I'm taking this, and even though my writing isn't perfect (I need to go back and comb through the chapters, editing them) I want to think I have something here. Of course, if you're...

Well, hey. Thanks for taking the time to read it nonetheless. I appreciate your feedback, and I hope in time I can improve on it and make it a story worth reading.

Hey, thanks for reading! I do plan to go over the chapters and change it so it's always past tense. As for the dialogue, I actually didn't think of that. And for the name slip, thanks for pointing it out! Overall, hope you enjoyed what there is so far despite some of the small errors

It's been quite some time since I've been on this website, the story I was working on was going in a direction I didn't care for, ended up going through three more revisions, and now I'm back working on a version of the story I'm happy with. Granted, I really only have the prologue and the first...

I suppose I'll throw my hat in the ring. I only have the prologue and the first chapter so far, but I'm ready for a potential roast https://www.scribblehub.com/series/409018/the-witch-and-the-otherworlder-a-tale-of-the-forgotten-lands/

Might as well throw my hat into the ring https://www.scribblehub.com/series/409018/the-forgotten-lands/

I'd say I'm still pretty new to writing, which is part of the reason I decided to write this, and so I'm wondering how I'm doing so far. Any and all feedback is welcome. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/409018/the-forgotten-lands/