1. It will get better the more you write. One thing you could is to calm down and read aloud what you've written.
2. Either tweak the story little, or add minor details that may improve a story filled with tropes.
3 Not sure what your problem is.
4 Do some interesting thing in the end, like...
The wall of text is the best way to engage in a conversation. It always has been the most efficient way of communication since the ancient times, quite literally. It allows you to spit out your creative thoughts and dump them over other people. Your beautiful article may look like a piece of...