Recent content by MindFudge

My first attempt at writing kinda flopped due to my terrible pacing and heavy styling. So, after a lot of advice, I decided to restart. However, I'm still not sure if the quality of writing is "decent". I'm no professional, so forgive small errors in pacing and grammar:blob_sweat: Thanks! CoTV

That "The" lowk describes my mood as I write a chapter. I put so much effort at the start and cba to continue the further i get

Those caps genuinely hurt my eyes lmao

Nah, don't worry about the connotations. Iv learnt to keep politics and religion out of my conversations. You come off just fine. Most people here have more than 2 braincells (I think) But yea, gl with your story!

Firstly, no problem, this is a free world (mostly), do what pleases you. The em dashes are killing my soul tho xD. Tbh I think it would be a story I'd read if not for the connotations I keep getting. That's probably a me issue, but I am technically part of the reader base, so... Also, I really...

Honestly im not sure why you used ai for the forum post. Your in a forum full of writers, so your not doing urself any favours. My honest opinion is to just restart, choose a different story because (assuming its still the same story), is waaaay to controversial. As a british (catholic), the...

Oo don't mind me if i do. Children if the void is a cosmic dark fantasy story that focuses on a comlex, interwoven fates of multiple characters. is very slow burn. It starts off with a small scope and will eventually reach a multi-universe spanning cosmic war. Children Of The Void Dang, imagine...

Oh yeah, that works. suprised i never thought of that. ⁽ʰᵒˡʸ ⁱ ˢᵗʳᵘᵍᵍˡᵉᵈ ʳᵉᵃᵈⁱⁿᵍ ᵗʰᵃᵗ. ᵃ ᵗᵃˢᵗᵉ ᵒᶠ ᵐʸ ᵒʷⁿ ᵐᵉᵈⁱᶜⁱⁿᵉ ˡᵐᵃᵒ⁾

Perfect. First, thanks for taking the time to read through my work! I really needed this. You're right about my writing style early on. I had no idea what I was doing lmao. I've considered going through earlier chapters, but I figured I'd leave them raw. But with what u have said, that's a bad...

Hmm, I'll add my one cents. A physiological story on a girl who is metaphorically "lost", but in time, finds the remnants of what had once made her whole. Could be a novel IMO ?‍♂️ Edit: How'd I find myself in the artists thread lmao

Don't u :blob_thor: me :blob_thor:!

Aye!

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