Recent content by Mikeynohmore

Is the MC autistic? I haven't read your story, but the degree to which he seems compelled to completely change his life course over a dumb bet with a dude he doesn't like and who wasn't even taking it seriously in the first place is kinda insane.

The crazy-strong, OP, game-breaking, absolutely BROKEN skill/class/build/etc. that nobody besides the protagonist has ever thought to exploit, even if the exploit itself would be obvious as shit to the playerbase of any real-world game. Even dumber is when, after the protagonist has shown...

Story sounds more like an alien invasion story with generic isekai tropes in place of generic sci-fi ones.

Yeah, Guilds in a lot of LitRPG stories are often just glorified mercenary companies and don't seem to do anything but fight and explore, with no crafting, politicking, or mercantile venturing to be seen. I'm just reading this stuff and going "why not just make them straight-up mercenaries?"

Bro, have you never watched any documentaries about serial killers, gangsters, rapists, white collar criminals, war criminals, etc.? Most of the people featured in these docs are vapid personalities with boring-ass motivations for the horrible things they do to others. Majority of villians don't...

You got a theme yet, bro? Having a theme or two to act as a guiding star(s) for where you plan to take your characters makes coming up with an actual story with them a whole lot simpler. At least, in my experience it has.