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  1. MichaelKiuchi

    My Free Feedback Thread

    Hello again Proctor, sorry for taking so long to reply. I was so busy recently, that I didn't have the time or energy to check on online stuff. :er_what_s: Thanks for taking the time to explain what you mean with examples. I understand it now better. I made a screenshot of it. It probably will...
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    My Free Feedback Thread

    Hello Proctor, thank you for taking the time to review my first chapter. I have some things that I want to thank you for, things I want to defend and a question at the end. But if you don't want to read it or don't have the time, I understand. =) 1. Thanks: - "you have double commas (,,)...
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Good day to you too SailusGebel, thank you for taking the time of reviewing my first chapter. English is also my second language so I was aware that I´ll have to do a lot of polishing. First time I hear of Grammarly and google docs, thanks for letting me know. I´ll check it out asap and will do...
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    My Free Feedback Thread

    Hello Proctor, if you find the time please give my first chapter a review. (2 is in the making) thx in advance :blob_salute: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/541491-war-zone-wellness/chapter/541495/
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Yet another feedback request :blob_salute: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/541491-war-zone-wellness/chapter/541495/
  6. MichaelKiuchi

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Hello TheTrinary, thank you for making this thread. If you find the time please review my first chapter, which is the only one right now but nr. 2 is in the making. Got positiv feedback from my friends so far but it would be interesting to get the opinion of somebody whos address I don´t know.^^...
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    Review Exchange!

    Hello there, review-exchange sounds like a good deal. How does it work? PM? Sorry, I´m new to all this.
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