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Duskfall: Chapter 3 - Remnants of the Past just dropped.

You're welcome, and as long as the critique helped you with something, then it served its purpose. You've also clearly learned something...

Yeah, it's a preference. Honestly, reading something primarily in first person is really, really weird to me. Most novels I have read...

I guess I now understand the preference aspect of first vs third person. Most of the novels and stories I read are in first person. When...

I base my characters off of character models. only I know who they are IRL. I know what they look like, if its a physical character...

I actually dislike it when it's part of a gag. "haha dude looks like a lady" is a lot less funny the 17th time. If it's part of the...

That's fair, though in Astolfo's case (Fate/) he actually has a "skill" that causes him to have very poor reasoning (and as a result, he...

Consistency, in narrative and character. Narrative and Character depth, to create a sense of lived moments rather than hollow plot...

Six years? Congratulation. I usually read romance rather than action. And I also right contemporary, character driven, slow-burn...

Monster girls, romance and smut :blob_evil: Okay honest answer, just solid characters, a story that isn't hard to follow, and writing...

What do I like to see in a story? Originality Plot Properly formed characters No massive continuity holes! No overly convoluted plot...

Sorry, I probably should have been clearer about what I meant by "getting" it. I'm not assuming one single reason why people like the...

How do you think I feel? I use to have a crush on him in Dragon Ball :blob_pout: seeing how he was done in Z hurt, and the haircut he...

Thanks for the extensive review. I appreciate it. I think you're right in saying the scene feels rushed, and that's probably due to my...

Slightly less brutal than the Kpopvirus