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MFontana replied to the thread What do you think of this character introduction?.I figured that was easy to infer with the mention of his smirk, but a bit more clarity probably couldn't hurt. I appreciate the input... -
MFontana reacted to Tsuru's post in the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?) with
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Same. Why the heck everyone that create this kind of great idea thread most always do the [.....that you wrote] part........ Its like... -
MFontana replied to the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?).Good news, El. An Anti-Villain is still qualifies as a type of villain, so they are still a "Villain" here. The only true difference...
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MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?) with Like.
Honestly... I wanted to answer Pain (Uzumaki Nagato) but when I looked at the thread's question about the most memorable villain, not...
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MFontana reacted to Rookieqw's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with Like.
Hi! Keep in mind, I'm not a very good author, so avoid trusting my suggestions. So, here's the first thing: No need to mention orc...
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MFontana reacted to K_Nishi's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with Like.
The operatic mask works visually, but I wonder if some readers might momentarily struggle to picture how much of his face is visible...
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MFontana reacted to Omarfaruq's post in the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?) with Like.
For me, my most memorable villain would be the Grey Clock from the Empire. I was making him just for fun, to create some obstacles for...
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MFontana reacted to Placeholder's post in the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"? with Like.
> Is there any JP Light Novel readers here? I've read vast quantities of webnovels in translation at syosetu.com and kakuyomu.jp. I...
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MFontana reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with Like.
When you said, this Lithe is villain, the contrast of his graceful appearance clearly memorable. Only because you said this is villain...
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MFontana replied to the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"?.I do read a few Light Novel series as well. That said, the style isn't really more about "telling" or "showing", but rather the...
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MFontana reacted to Deleted member 44974's post in the thread My target is the Japanase LN readers. Is it good to use "telling" more often rather than "showing"? with Haha.
That's a weird way to say @Tabula_Rasa will report it to see what will happens.
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MFontana posted the thread Who are some of your most memorable villains? (And why?) in Discussions & Writing Tips.Seeing as how I've been working on the opening of Chapter 3 of Duskfall, and doing so introduces one of that series' main, recurring...
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MFontana replied to the thread Can a slow-burn military fantasy survive without an OP protagonist?.From what I can gather, you have yourself a clear target audience. So the advice I'd offer is this: Write for your target audience...