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Head cannon is that Voldemort is the tutorial fight in context with the story at large especially considering he's small potatoes... -
MFontana replied to the thread Feedback on my action block..Okay, depending on what style you're writing for, and your target audience, my advice should be taken with a grain of salt. [My...
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Thank you everyone for the advice, I will try to split it up into questions and answers more. -
MFontana replied to the thread Do most visual novels suck?.As someone who has played more than my fair share of good ones (and trash ones), if you want a good feel for a Visual Novel, go with the...
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MFontana replied to the thread What's the smallest thing that could change your entire storyline?.The entire multiverse could collapse from a disruption in the balance between worlds, and the Elements, Life, and Death. If Morrigan...
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The Principles of Food Theory in Storytelling In characterization, "Food Theory" suggests that a character's nature is revealed through...
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If it's the Underwater Forum I'm way ahead of you. *^^* I have been a user there since about 2000.
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What you need to ask yourself: Does your information advance the plot? Does it emerge organically through character interactions? Does...
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Yeah, I totally agree with the suggestion here; make it conversational.
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I've got a bit of the opening of The Elarian Chronicles: Duskfall (Chapter 3) typed up and would like some feedback on the presentation...
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MFontana replied to the thread Question about oversharing or lore dumping in story?.To address your questions, and offer a bit of advice. First, the advice. Keep doing what you're doing. It is working quite well. It...
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So in this situation, my deuteragonist, is trying to explain the bond to the protagonist. He has been transported to the world, has no...
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MFontana replied to the thread To authors who write RPG-style stories: I have a question..THIS 👆👆👆🍙👆👆👆
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This could actually be interesting. MC kills a random dude for [reason] and gains [reward: think squid game] Then the tension becomes...
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MFontana replied to the thread Story request (Fanfic).Well... I'll give you points for originality. I've never heard of that kind of obscure blending for "fan-fiction". That said, I can't...