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MFontana replied to the thread How does your protagonist achieve peace?.Ooo... that is a tough one. I'd need to define Peace for each of them separately. Then would need to address how he/she goes about... -
MFontana reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread How does your protagonist achieve peace? with
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Peace in Fiction Achieving peace has become a cliché motivation in mainstream fiction. For example, in isekai fiction, the protagonist... -
MFontana replied to the thread Silent acceptance or vocal criticism--Which is better?.That depends entirely on the story, and your intent. (If you're writing a choose-your-own-adventure style series, you may want to...
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MFontana reacted to CountVanBadger's post in the thread Silent acceptance or vocal criticism--Which is better? with Like.
We all know that the vast majority of our readers aren't going to leave comments, no matter what site we're on. They're happy to just...
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MFontana reacted to L1aei's post in the thread Silent acceptance or vocal criticism--Which is better? with Like.
Disney is a good example of what happens when they listen to the loudest.
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MFontana reacted to treze's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with Like.
Book/Series Title: Dream Dungeon Genre: LitRPG Link: Dream Dungeon Type of Feedback Requested: Targeted Critque - Need feedback on...
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The internet is already a fast-paced, impatient environment in the first place. Mix that with the fact that a lot of people lack media...
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MFontana reacted to jean-marc21's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with Like.
Hello, I read your thread and I'm interested in your offer for serious critique. I understand you have a specific format, so here are...
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MFontana reacted to Our_Lady_in_Twilight's post in the thread What's up with the downvoting? with Like.
Yeah theres issue with grade inflation as well. Most people are going to click a 5* as a way of saying 'nice job', so anything below...
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Personally, I think it should be mandatory to leave comments with 1 or 5 star reviews. 2-4 can go silently but not the extremes. I...
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MFontana reacted to Deleted member 44974's post in the thread How is this for a blurb/synopsis? with Like.
Words right out of my mouth.
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MFontana replied to the thread How is this for a blurb/synopsis?.I appreciate the effort and detail you put into answering this feedback request, @FRWriter, personally I didn't feel you owed any...
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As an apology for my low effort comments, I've really taken my time and analysed this as best as I can. I hope it helps. Man, I used...
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MFontana replied to the thread How is this for a blurb/synopsis?.Thank you very much, El. That truly helps quite a bit. I've done some polishing already and came to something that I think will deliver...
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Does it deliver the hook well? Well, I'm quite curious about how Tobias will hide the mysterious woman. And yes, the synopsis has a...