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MFontana reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with
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Oh about time! I need your input about my new writing on Fantasy Genre! Book/Series Title: MERCILESS Genre: Grimdark Link: MERCILESS... -
MFontana reacted to c37's post in the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] with Like.
Hey man, I would appreciate some old school criticism. Book/Series Title: B*stard of Abaddon. Genre: Dark-fantasy, action, adventure...
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MFontana posted the thread Editorial Critique Requests [CLOSED (to further submissions)] in Story Feedback.After a fair bit of consideration, I'm opting to open my own critiques thread for those who might be interested in getting thorough...
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MFontana replied to the thread Power System Centered around Lovecraftian Gods.This is a spectacularly well-designed blend between Hard and Soft systems, and makes for an interesting pantheon concept as well. ?
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MFontana reacted to MakBow's post in the thread Power System Centered around Lovecraftian Gods with Like.
So, I decided to create this power system for a mystery, steampunk, horror, fantasy story I intend to make since I want to tackle the...
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MFontana reacted to Cookiez_N_Potionz's post in the thread What's the best and worst feedback you've ever received as an author? with Like.
Someone gave me advice about my grammar and than made a chapter of my Webnovel sound better. When I reread the improvements I was more...
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MFontana reacted to LastMinami's post in the thread How can i write believable relationships. with Like.
Use yourself as a reference, and your friends too. If you can't, watch anime or series. If that takes too long, play visual novels. If...
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MFontana replied to the thread Would Love Some Feedback! ☮️.Finished the Chapter 1 critique, and sent it (via private conversation). There's a lot there to digest and the forum thread just isn't...
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MFontana reacted to Cookiez_N_Potionz's post in the thread Hey y'all, all of you are a blessing! ❤️ with Like.
Just wanted to thank all my readers for checking out my Webnovels. You didn't have to give me a chance, but you did and I'm forever...
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Is it still in this thread? Because... by Trogdor, do not start with a wake up and daily routine scene. Please... It's... Just, no...
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GSC? Oh, yeah! Watched and even translated! I really love that one! Btw ep. 6 & 7 are out now I wouldn´t say it´s cruel. It´s just...
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MFontana replied to the thread Would Love Some Feedback! ☮️.Read the first chapter, and will try to type up the critique on it later tonight if I'm feeling up for it. Been doing a bit better today...