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Nah not AI IMO, Marc makes scripts in an academic writing style. I asked co-pilot to make an essay called "Why writing advice Often...

You can thanks the two published authors you quoted for their feedback by buying their books from Amazon.

Your feedback is very detailed and technical. I appreciate your criticism and suggestions, especially regarding the choreography and...

Under the lens of what you're aiming for El, this bit is exceptional. You're hitting all of the beats you're after to build visual...

You will find his feedback constructive. This is because him and M.G Driver is the same being.

It's no trouble, El. Really. I've got about four hours to kill in the morning, so reading and critiquing for you is a fine way to spend...

I appreciate your attention. I probably don't want to be too much of a bother here. So, I'll ask for a one-time read for ease of...

People say I write very cinematic, and that's because I very much picture EVERYTHING in my head, and try my best to describe it.

I only have the time for a quick skim right now, so I'll refrain from offering a rating and full critique and analysis until I have the...

Feedback on Fight Scene Visualization Can you rate how visual the fight scenes in the following a chapter are in your mind as a reader...

Eh... depends on the execution. Could work. Could end up trash. If you want to include a mature woman as one of the characters in this...

Being unapologetically myself, and delivering that same tone in my stories, through my characters. (I consider this a strength, but I'm...

Consequences, I guess. It's why I have a few fanfics on this account. I like to think about the what ifs a lot, about what happens when...

Can I also add a 2nd thing? No? Too bad still am I am not afraid to hurt my MC, reducing his plot armour to just not... ending the...

I don't feel comfortable assessing myself. Of course I think I have a veritable *list* of things I do awesome. I believe people tend to...