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Dialogue, and specifically natural character voices. I’ve been told by multiple people that they can tell exactly who is talking even...

Don't give a shit about what readers want.

It does. Both sound cool to me! Seems like you're trying a few different things. Like high density prose vs smutty reader driven fiction...

The latest one

Plaracter. Or Chlot.

Character, because the plot develops off of who the character is and what they are doing. I find my antagonist in my characters' back...

Character... because readers are more likely to connect with a relatable character than with a spectacular plot. A world doomed by an...

What makes my fiction unique? Most fantasy treats power as something that must be used, often through conflict or domination. My story...

This is much clearer, in terms of the structure, and shows clear intent and purpose now. There are still several elements that I don't...

Here's the who new system I made, tell me what you think? [Power System: Cultivation] Within the bodies of all living things exists...

That's a different question, and it would depend entirely upon the story itself with the exception of my classical-adjacent style within...

The story I'm currently writing has no isekai, no litRPG, no system, no medieval fantasy, no magic system, no OP protagonist, and...

"Actually nothing is unique"?☝️ I'm just teasing. How would you pitch your fiction to a reader then?

It was a couple of days ago... but I learned there is a lounge feature somewhere on the site.

Ultimately that is something you'd have to consider for yourself within the system you design for your own story's narrative. My...