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MFontana replied to the thread What do you think of this fight scene opening?.There are three characters in the party, which may be a main source of confusion for you here about the emotional states of the... -
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This is littered with typos: misspelled words, wrong words, poor comma usage along with other punctuation. That's minor and easily... -
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Well, initially I could visualize the threat of the orcs (or orks) at the beginning of the scene. However, when entering the battle, I...
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As the thread title implies, I'd like to get some feedback on this opening to the fight sequence in The Elarian Chronicles, Chapter 2.2...
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MFontana reacted to Cookiez_N_Potionz's post in the thread Hey there, I need your opinion with Like.
Once again, thx for all the advice! ❤️
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MFontana reacted to CountVanBadger's post in the thread In historical fantasy novels, which do you think is more important, political conspiracy or magical duels？ with Like.
...why are half the posts here in Chinese?
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MFontana replied to the thread Hey there, I need your opinion.Okay, with three characters things might be difficult for the synopsis. Best advice I could offer is to introduce the one the story...
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MFontana reacted to Cookiez_N_Potionz's post in the thread Hey there, I need your opinion with Like.
So, can I mention the villain? I did mention that Joss and Elijah are brother and sister. Hey, thx Mike! ☮️ 1) Who is the...
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MFontana replied to the thread Class/profession debate.Right... "fight" the "demon king". It really depends. In one scenario I'd probably BE the Demon-King, but if that were the case I'd do...
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Cat burgler, I would also probably just bide my time till I had enough info to make up my own mind on weather the demon king its...
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MFontana replied to the thread In historical fantasy novels, which do you think is more important, political conspiracy or magical duels？.In a Historical Fantasy novel, the most important thing to me, would be the Historical Accuracy. (It doesn't have to be perfect, but it...
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MFontana reacted to Empire145's post in the thread In historical fantasy novels, which do you think is more important, political conspiracy or magical duels？ with Like.
Dear authors, in my personal opinion, war should be the continuation of politics, so political conspiracy should be the main body of the...
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Just me? Absolutely not. Now, if I could go with my wife and preferably our cats, sure. If just my wife, then we need to make sure the...
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MFontana replied to the thread How to make friends?.This basically sums it up nicely in my experience anyway.
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I've been introverted since birth and the lockdown made me even more self-contained. Wanderlust made me go everywhere. 2024, I climbed a...