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Do you expect a book to give you all the answers in the first chapter? Like to explain everything in a limited amount of time and space? To answer: 1) Shaky memory due to cognitive decline, this thing is explain in later chapters. 2) Also explained in later chapters. 3) Yes, the teacher has seen...

Thanks, 6 years of writing only to receive feedback like this every ducking time. - 黙 れ

Well, my novel ain't getting that many comments and likes but I had a few comments. I know my writing is just downright bad, my common sense of what is show or tell isn't clear as I write in 1st person. First, someone complains that there is little detail. I rewrite the chapters now I get...

1. Their skills. They may have similar feats but will get different skills based on their personalities, which can make you lose or win a battle. For example, a genius military commander who doesn't know how to fight properly will get skills based on his accomplishments. Someone who did a...

So, I am revising my LN and there are 3 chapters that I revised. I want to know if anyone is willing to read these 3 chapters and give me some feedback(aside from grammar). The LN itself is around 114 chapters long but all of them are drafts that need to be improved...

Well, let's give it a shot. If you are willing and have time sneak a peek at my chapter too. I would appreciate if you will/ https://www.scribblehub.com/read/730110-that-time-me-and-my-classmate-got-reincarnated-in-another-world/chapter/730114/ Here is my first chapter, I did revise it once...