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    State/Kingdon/City Building Informational Request

    Obviously, your character needs to have some level of influence or power that makes them capable of leading. If the focus is kingdom-building, the main character isn't just a normal adventurer or mercenary. Since your setting is about several hundred people transmigrating and not just one, I'm...
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    Minacia's First Chapter Feedback

    Helloo! Could I bother you to take a peek at mine? ^^ Atm I'm trying to learn how to set up a story properly https://www.scribblehub.com/series/222498/termination-system/
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Helloo, May I ask you to give my first chapter a look? I recently started writing, and I'm curious to know what people think of the quality ^^ https://www.scribblehub.com/series/222498/termination-system/
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