Obviously, your character needs to have some level of influence or power that makes them capable of leading. If the focus is kingdom-building, the main character isn't just a normal adventurer or mercenary. Since your setting is about several hundred people transmigrating and not just one, I'm...
Helloo!
Could I bother you to take a peek at mine? ^^
Atm I'm trying to learn how to set up a story properly
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/222498/termination-system/
Helloo,
May I ask you to give my first chapter a look?
I recently started writing, and I'm curious to know what people think of the quality ^^
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/222498/termination-system/