Recent content by malgeroth

Would love some of your feedback on my first chapter. I just realized how much I focus on character thoughts and was wondering whether it's more of an issue instead of a narrative style. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/611236/tethered-by-the-soul-system/

I've just started my first novel and would really like to have your opinion on it. Title: Threaded Skies Synopsis: "Our sole purpose is only to oversee and protect the progress of those who remain..." Hiraine wakes up in the steampunkish 'Anchor World' with large gaps in his memory and a...

Thanks for the feedback.

This is my first time writing a novel and I'm kinda concerned with how I'm presenting the setting. I'd really appreciate any feedback you have to offer! scribblehub.com/series/300449/threaded-skies/