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Lysander_Works reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with
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Only about 1/3 of the isekai I've seen have the character wanting to go back. Most, either it's just not an option (e.g. they died in... -
Lysander_Works reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
Does this story have a hook? Well, as a reader, I would be drawn to the part I quoted in your fiction premise. My heart would be drawn...
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Lysander_Works reacted to eagle_360's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
As the reader. I would want to clarify if this would be the usual action/adventure fantasy. Because if I'm reading this blurb, I'm...
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Lysander_Works replied to the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description?.I thing the biggest problem is Im trying not to toss in any spoilers to the plot. Then again, the fever I have is also making it harder...
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Lysander_Works replied to the thread Resolved Does anyone know why I can't update my stories description?.I am having the same problem. Recently went in to alter the description/blurb, and despite getting a "saved" message, the content is...
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Lysander_Works reacted to PurpleXanmal's post in the thread Resolved Does anyone know why I can't update my stories description? with Like.
I can't update my stories description. It let's me edit it, click save, but it doesn't save at all. Is it one of those, my description...
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Lysander_Works replied to the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description?.I'm gonna take a second crack it it here before nodding off to bed. Waking to a world unfamiliar, in a world far too different from my...
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Lysander_Works reacted to Puffikki's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
Slightly conflicting tonezees here, shifting from a casual sounding opening and playful, to heavier, desperate even. It makes me wonder...
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Lysander_Works reacted to SouthernMaiden's post in the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? with Like.
I would suggest, shorten it. Make it a bit punchier. Possibly split it into three paragraphs. Also, first sentence seems weak. Hit me...
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Lysander_Works posted the thread [Resolved] Content inside of table cells won't center align in Bug Reports.Update: The solution I found was to simply import the table and then go from there.
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Lysander_Works replied to the thread Fanfics and Monetization.I wanted to check in here to see if a fanfic (generated by creating a cross-over) would be allowed without any pay links, and in what...
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Lysander_Works posted the thread How Weak or Strong is my Hook/description? in Discussions & Writing Tips.Got a new story soon to launch, but I skipped the synopsis all the way to now, and now I really don't know how it's supposed to feel...