Recent content by Lyric44

I have thought up of a list and was wondering if I could get some extra opinions. Elegy For The Epilogue Elegy Of An Epilogue The Epilogue's Elegy Requiem of Retribution Of course these aren't final but my current title really sucks, same with the cover image.

Oh gotcha I'll go ahead and do that thank you! Really? That would be awesome. I don't have much atm because of my midterms but that would be a huge help

Oh yeah I’m probably going to delete them Cus in hindsight only like 30% of it served a purpose

I'm over here lying face down on my bed with my legs kicking into the air because how good I think this is. It's been two whole days since it's been released, but I cannot come close to writing anything like it for the next. I'm actually STUCK LOL. omg I'm so happy how good it is compared to...

Humans have wants, desires, emotions, goals. They are irrational. Erase that and you are left with an empty shell. I really think that you cannot create a character and remove their humanity entirely. At that point they are just as good as dead. Take an Ai for example. This isn't a human...

I think if this is the world lore before your story then it kinda isn't going to be easy to write. If your story stars the Dom guy then maybe...? I am going to assume that the story sets past that point as implied by your last paragraph. Regardless, I think your world building is too narrow...

I'm too nervous to write in cafes lol... maybe library's but a starbucks never mood

I've kinda locked myself into a bad habit where the only times I can write without too many distractions is 12 am - 8 am. You saw that right, AM. I think it's something to do with my family being awake and I get uneasy but idk. Anyways, I love writing with either a podcast right in front of...

If you're writing a scene between the protagonist and an enemy, it usually isn't a great idea to switch povs. In the situation that the povs you want to switch are pertaining to different areas of the combat, then it should be executed like so. But if you want to do that mid scene then whoever...

Thank you!

Hi! I was wondering whether you could give me a couple tips on prose and dialogue based on the last three chapters of my story. Basically, I'm at the point where everything I put on the paper feels like its terrible and doesn't read well. Eg: Sentence Rhythm and flow. As for my synopsis and...

I write in third person, but I love my protagonist and it really is so much fun watching her grow.

LitRPG's feel more realistic while VRMMORPG's are more light-hearted based on the stuff I've read. If I want to have fun creating items, boss mechanics, skills, npcs and quests, I would write a vrmmo. Although, you do have to factor in real world relations and how much impact the game has on...