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    As an author, have you ever experienced this?

    I always does that, I just felt like ain't good.
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    As an author, have you ever experienced this?

    Well I do, as I already previously stated, being overshadowed by others of my peers and being compared to them, isn't really a good experienced.
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    As an author, have you ever experienced this?

    I admire you people for loving your works, quite the opposite of me, well it is no surprise considering, I never been good at anything at all.
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    As an author, have you ever experienced this?

    Ya know, you're writing then you went back and reads it, found it bad and not good enough, so you went ahead and written it, though no matter what you did it still suck ass. Sometimes ya wonder, wil the stories in mind will perish alongside me. am I an author or just no one? a person without...
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    That view high

    Yeah, it is further elevated when you can count in one hand how many did people viewed you're works.
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    I need advice

    Creating stories trying to reach 4001 tales, well that inspired me, I'll go do the same thing, honestly remaining consistent writing 102 stories on top of that, man I applaud youl
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    Need help again for writing and critique

    I'll chiseled it in mind.
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    Need help again for writing and critique

    Seemed like I did made it worse, well I'm trying to paint a vivid description, though the poetic writing didn't help.
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    Need help again for writing and critique

    So I incorporated those helpful individuals helps, though there still something wrong in my paragraphs as if something is missing. Here it is. The morning sun peered over the horizon, casting hues upon the grassy hill, each blade bathed in dew swayed in ripples, brushed against one another, as...
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    My story have 24 chapters and no feedback,How to get comments, readers and support?

    Same as me, though it is probably because I only updates my works once a year =]
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    Need help for writing this and critiques.

    I rewrote it, is this good enough, is isn't really that well made, with regards to awkwardly structure and abrupt changes and grammatical mistakes. The vast expanse and stories told within are an ephemeral moment, however amidst such thoughts people of sagacious mind could ebulliently discern...
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    Need help for writing this and critiques.

    well, thanks imma do it right now, I forgotten how to reply so yeah(nvm found it and deleted my past comment), anyway shorter sentences is usually the thing a struggle the most, so it is quite hard for me to write in a short manner so I often opted into writing it long, the few spelling mistake...
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    Need help for writing this and critiques.

    So I have a bunch of paragraphs here, and I'm struggling trying to find ways to make the structure pop out, I'm not really that adepts at English, as I mainly relies solely on instinct alone and auto correct using the markor app as my writing app, there's a lot of grammatical mistakes there I...
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    Hidden Gem

    Blue ? is my fav
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