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No, in fact, this is related to the background of The Times. My novel sets its background according to The Times. Now it is the era of...

Are you German, perhaps?

Here are some thoughts that popped up as I read your chapter: Okay, some guy in an apartment must be middle-aged (that's what my head...

Thanks a lot for the encouragement. I'll keep working on that balance and check out your work for inspiration. Regards. :)

Thank you very much for taking the time to write all of this down. I'll see what I can do about it. I definitely don't want the reader...

Well, this is my feedback as a casual reader who only reads it once without repeating it. Overall, your chapter is more telling than...

you talk like chatgpt for one. all of this sounds inhuman out the ass. "you're so right--it's such a cliche!" ??? holy lmao. out of...

okay.. I'm not going to beat around the bush. But I also don't want to discourage you. Take what I say with a grain of salt. I'm in a...

Your boss doesn't really feel tough. You did a good job describing his appearance but I don't really feel his 'presence', primarily...

Thank you for sharing your opening. The atmosphere and imagery are very intriguing, especially the faceless figure and the golden card —...

Hello kind people. I've been writing in my free time for a few months, but I'm fairly bad at taking a step back and putting off the...

Doesn't seem interesting to me. What you are promising (at least that's how I felt reading the synopsis) is a bland MC, going around...

When reading a story, book, or the like, what are some of your favorite styles of openers? In Media Res (In the thick of the action)...

okay... go to the latin, its a prefix. pro- always means pro-totype, pro-logue. Pro is always first or previous. Okay, probably hindi...

I think you've put more effort here than was put into this story. Congrats.