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Thanks for taking the time to look at it and give your real thoughts. I see what you are saying about all the isekai stuff out there; it...

Just skimmed over it real quick, and it already looks much better. The aesthetic and structure is clearly varied nicely, which does make...

Hey! Where can I read the story? Am I missing something? Or are we suposed to comment on the premise?

Appreciate it! This helps more than you think ?

Overall, the narrative is better than before. The pacing is quite smooth. However, there are some notes that could be improved: The...

Hi everyone! I’m currently working on improving my writing, especially immersion and “show vs. tell." I’ve been told my prose can feel a...

Okay. Starting on the Prose, from a technical standpoint. There is a solid bare-bones structure, but overall a lot of room for...

Thank you very much. This helps a lot!

Hey, I've read the first chapter briefly and there are a lot of things you have to work on. First of all you've got big energy and a...

Chapter 1: Don't Blink The kicks that had been raining down on Levin only moments ago began to lose their weight. The men’s screams...

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and share such thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate how specific and constructive your...

I’m also a newer writer, so take this with a grain of salt — but right now this reads more like a teaser/synopsis than a fully lived-in...

Let me tell you something. Most new authors don't really meant it when they asked for feedbacks. They just want someone to read their...

Hahahha. I'll definetily check out Strunk and White. Thank you for your time.

Well, the first thing I would do, if I were you, is to tell AI to go fuck itself, sideways if possible. The second thing you should do...