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Louhi reacted to foxoftheasterisk's post in the thread Are 'em dashes' a put off simply because AI uses it a lot? with
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I refuse to let "AI" change how I write. Besides, "AI" only uses them a lot because writers use them a lot. That's very much how it works. -
Louhi reacted to HarryGarland's post in the thread Are 'em dashes' a put off simply because AI uses it a lot? with Like.
What do you think of em dashes in a novel's text? Personally, I find em dashes quite stylistic. It adds variety to the punctuations we...
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Louhi reacted to Corty's post in the thread Are 'em dashes' a put off simply because AI uses it a lot? with Like.
Yes. I specifically stopped using them because of AI.
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Louhi reacted to Macha's post in the thread Are 'em dashes' a put off simply because AI uses it a lot? with Like.
It's 2012 for me. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8060650/1/Incident-Report
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Louhi replied to the thread Are 'em dashes' a put off simply because AI uses it a lot?.Aren't you and MoonClaimed the same person? This is a shameless self-promotion.
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Louhi reacted to Juia_Darkcrest's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Like.
I am the opposite of A-Random-Writer. I made it about 1/2 the way through and lost the thread. The fight might make sense, but the...
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Louhi reacted to melchi's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Like.
Paragraphing needs work. For max clarity each character gets its own paragraph. Both of these are Clara. Combine. First noun is...
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Louhi reacted to L1aei's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Like.
I feel like including where Clara's and Erna's gazes were focused on would've helped. Before they lunged forward, I was envisioning them...
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Louhi reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Like.
Thank you for your feedback. The title of this fiction is Blood Rose Princess. You can check it in my signature.
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Louhi reacted to A-Random-Writer's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Like.
I don't usually like stories with "mana" and special abilities, but this one was actually pretty interesting. What's the full name of...
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Louhi reacted to Leti's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Like.
This is how you ask for feedback. You ask what aspects from your story needing them. Summoning our fight scenes experts and...
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Louhi reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter? with Like.
Feedback on Fight Scene Visualization Can you rate how visual the fight scenes in the following a chapter are in your mind as a reader...
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Imagine getting arrested because of a children card game. Your cellmates are going to commit unalive from cringe.
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Louhi replied to the thread [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?.I am not qualified enough to give a rating because I read and write Asian novels. Western novels fight scenes work differently. In Asian...
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Necronomicon posted! WhuUur?