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    Using IRL Citynames/clubs

    Just as the title says. Can someone sue me if I use IRL Clubnames. I am currently writting a soccer novel, and my MC starts in a small village, in a small soccer club. I used my old soccer club as a template. At least the club name. Is this a problem? I dont think any of them will ever see...
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    Headache Of Units Types

    I measure everthing in bananas
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    Character not acting like their age(older acting younger)

    But this is only a problem if the author has no backstory, no reason for the character to act like this. In my case, it isn't true for all older people, but for this one in particular. And it isnt like he acts like a young man, but more like he pretends to be.
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    Character not acting like their age(older acting younger)

    In my current novel, I have a character who is already in his sixties. Despite this, he doesn't want to be treated that way; instead, he prefers to be casual with the main character, who is in his twenties. The reason for this is his past. He comes from a rich family and had to take on...
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    Writing Prompt Write the Fanfiction, 50 Shades of Gey

    In a digital world where players sought enlightenment through leveling and the intricate balancing of cosmic energies, Amara, once known as Alex, awoke to her new female avatar, her stats glimmering on the System Status Card before her: System Status Card 1 Name: Amara Class: Cosmic Devotee...
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    How much details do you use?

    As the title says, do you go into detail for every action, or do you just skim through it? It could be a new morning or a fight. I personally use so much detail that even a simple morning feels like 500 words. I personally love it when the author goes into detail. It’s just so much easier to...
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    Do you use slang?

    Yo Void youre german right? Do you think it would be funny to make a novel, where the mc is like a karen. Calling police for music over 22:00 Uhr and so on?´Always looking out the window...
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    Do you use slang?

    I am talking about smaller things, like wanna, gonna, Aint and similiar.
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    Do you use slang?

    This is something I found lacking in many works. Like, everyone talkes like their have a stick up their asses, and if they need to use the right grammar in a freaking conversation among friends. There are some on scribble and royal, but I NEVER found one with slang, maybe darfws but thats it on...
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    What improvements can be made?

    It is. They all sound the same. And his work is like this too. Im not saying that he let ChatGPT write the novel, but he let it work over. It is not bad, if we get better quality because of it, but then the author should atleast put it in the bio.
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    What improvements can be made?

    sound like you used ai
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    Offering myself(Services)

    xD Well, as I said, I'm willing to write an individual chapter for anyone who is interested.
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    Offering myself(Services)

    Chapters are no longer online and have been deleted. And the old ones from SH have been completely deleted...
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    Offering myself(Services)

    Example in which sense? If you want a test chapter, why don't you give me some information?
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    Offering myself(Services)

    Yo, LordInui here. I want to offer my services as a co-author. What do I mean by that? Quite simply. I love writing, but I do not like creating the "background." This became evident as I wrote over 180k words in chapters but never got over ten chapters per novel. In short: I'm pretty good...
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