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    How did you feel at the end of your first story?

    Happy that I completed it. Anxious how others feel about it.
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    The Price of Power and those who abuse it

    Power reveals, not corrupts. I will behave the same as I do now. Help who I can and try to live humbly.
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    What's the smallest thing that could change your entire storyline?

    If the villain did not give Casimir his "birthright" in the most invasive way possible, one person would have been radicalized, more lives would have been ruined and the mc would have been more screwed in the future.
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    How do you write an engaging main character that makes you want to read the rest of his story?

    I do want to write this other story with a female lead in between Altered One, though. She is based off of an old character. The story and concept art is there. I'm just writing it now. Thank you.
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    Looking for an assessment on the first 5 chapters?

    I modified the prologue and want to see if the story flows better and if the hook is clear. Also what do you think about the mc? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2181545/altered-one/
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    Real-Life Horrors

    I get enough horrors from the news.
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    Military Run Empire

    Isn't that Naruto? I picture it as a country that values strength and ability over everything else. If you aren't born with something useful for military, you will be sent to work in the fields or the mines to die. Also you are easy picking for those people in power. They can do whatever they...
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    I will toss my glove on the ground. En garde. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2181545/altered-one/
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    Ask anything

    What is your favorite music genre? If the answer is Rock/Metal, did you get into it by watching AMVs?
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    Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2181545/altered-one/
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    How do you write an engaging main character that makes you want to read the rest of his story?

    The first five chapters of my book is the mc trying his best to help others but losing because he is outmatched. The middle of the book is him training and dealing with the cards he was dealt. Meeting new friends and investigating until the midpoint. The ending of the book is him getting a win.
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    Is your character a mary sue?

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