This is my first story on ScribbleHub, so I’d really appreciate any feedback you have.
I’m especially interested in how it made you feel while reading.
When silence learned to speak
I just dropped a chapter of my story and I’m trying to improve my writing 🖤
I’d really love feedback on:
– pacing (does it feel slow or rushed?)
– characters (do they feel real?)
– emotional impact (did anything actually hit?)
Be honest, I can take it 🙂
When silence learned to speak