Thanks for the time and effort you took in writing this. I appreciate. I see reasons in your words, I have noted them, and will make efforts to improve my writing.
Looking for review swaps. Juicy ones! If you have any critique, feel free to DM me. Just read the first five chapters, and drop your review. Will do the same for you.
Here is the link to my novel.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2254128/energi-the-primordial-conduit/
I am happy to swap reviews. The title of my novel is 'FAMILY ABOVE All', and it is a fantasy novel that centers on action, adventure, and romance.
Here is the link below:
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/819873/family-above-all/
Wanna review swap? Here is my link below.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/819873/family-above-all/
After reviewing mine, expect yours in less than 24 hours.