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LeslieLevendale reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread What do YOU like to see in a story? with
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Words that make sense, don't have too many glaring grammar issues to drag me out of the story, a plot, and narrative consistency - if... -
LeslieLevendale replied to the thread The Shape of Kindness - new chapters and full of British humour.Not craving for feedback but if someone is keen to help me out with their constructive feedback (not something like it's a piece of...
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LeslieLevendale reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread The Shape of Kindness - new chapters and full of British humour with Like.
Latest Chapter or Seeking Feedback, depending on your goal with sharing.
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LeslieLevendale replied to the thread looking for help from Japan.That's Japanese minimalism for you :-). That's what I want to mirror in my dialogues but I'm struggling with big time. Anyway, thank...
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LeslieLevendale reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread looking for help from Japan with Like.
Lost contact with the people I knew who could help you. Don't remember if the one taught in Nagano or if the other one married a woman...
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LeslieLevendale reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread What do YOU like to see in a story? with Like.
Yes. I like the authoritative "drop" of a single sentence paragraph sometimes. Its a kind of a "thud" as you drop it when its done...
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LeslieLevendale replied to the thread looking for help from Japan.No worries. Thanks for the reply.
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I’m not very familiar with Nagano Prefecture.
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I use it exclusively for sudden interruptions. Cuz I keep forgetting the other use cases for it.
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LeslieLevendale replied to the thread looking for help from Japan.Thank you. This is very helpful. Local knowledge is a bonus. But it is more important to have an insight into etiquettes and cultural...
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I'm from West Japan, but Nagano is Central Japan. Maybe @K_Nishi or @rest256 can help or know someone who can.
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LeslieLevendale replied to the thread The Shape of Kindness - new chapters and full of British humour.Oh, sorry, I do apologise.
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LeslieLevendale reacted to blackcrowcrowd's post in the thread The Shape of Kindness - new chapters and full of British humour with Like.
Hello~ I believe this should've been put in the Latest Chapters Discussion forum and not the discussions and writing tips
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LeslieLevendale reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread What do YOU like to see in a story? with Like.
paragraphs would do for a start, among other things. I recently peeked in on a new book. first chapter, real paragraphs. My heart leaped...
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LeslieLevendale reacted to DeOwl's post in the thread What do YOU like to see in a story? with Like.
No angst. And a happy ending. Enough shit in this world as is right now