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    Recommendations BL Action series

    Shameless self-promotion here, heh I currently write two BL novels: - historical fantasy, warlord x warlord main couple, enemies to lovers, wartime politics The Scum Warlord Stabbed Me In The Back [BL] - smut fest parody, trasmigration, horny self-aware MC who only wants to sleep with the...
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    What are the stuff that are needed to considered while writing in third person pov.

    I'd recommend choosing right away what kind of third person you want to write. If you're moving from first person, then a close third person (limited third person) would be an easier switch. You basically glue yourself to one character's POV, as if you're sitting on their shoulder and narrating...
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    Feedback request: new BL smut novel bc... trends

    Ahah, thanks for your input, I appreciate it a lot! I'm glad I managed to plaster all over what readers could expect from this silly thing :cool: Thanks for the link! I've joined the channel, though I'm more of a lurker. But the community seems really nice so far! The setting is a western...
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    Feedback request: new BL smut novel bc... trends

    Hi everyone! As the title says, I decided to start a side project - a silly smutty novel I could write just for the fun of it. However, we all want someone to read our works, right? So I humbly ask for your input and wise words. I have posted 2 chapters so far. I'd be grateful to if you...
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    I'll read a couple chapters of your story and give feedback best I can [No Submissions Temporarily (I need to catch up on everyone)]

    Hi! Thank you so much, I hope you know you're doing god's work entertaining so many authors, even when the genre is not your thing:) With the siege logistics in the prologue - I was a bit afraid to go into full military description since, well, my target audience probably doesn't care much...
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    how can i make slavic-coded wuxia-inspired novel appealing to readers?

    Hi there! Ahaha, indeed, it seems we all long for some foreign culture, maybe it's the mystery of it, heh. Oh, your novel sounds pretty interesting! I actually feel like I have a similar thing -- I don't think the majority of people will realize the wuxia inspiration since the premise is...
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    how can i make slavic-coded wuxia-inspired novel appealing to readers?

    true-true, it's a stretch from my side. i thought of mixing it up bc my culture has a history of 'martial artists' who banded together into 'sects' and operated as an independent martial power. the majority of them were from humble origins, and the 'sects' accepted anyone and taught them...
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    how can i make slavic-coded wuxia-inspired novel appealing to readers?

    thanks for the recommendation, i appreciate it a lot and will definitely check it out! i tried looking for the type of novels you recommended but it was a concept i struggled to describe and it was a fruitless search. so, thanks, you really helped out a lot!
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    I'll read a couple chapters of your story and give feedback best I can [No Submissions Temporarily (I need to catch up on everyone)]

    hi! i'd love some feedback, i'm only starting out as well so i'd be grateful for any reviews https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2116560/the-scum-warlord-stabbed-me-in-the-back-bl/
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    how can i make slavic-coded wuxia-inspired novel appealing to readers?

    hi everyone. i'm a big fan of xianxia/wuxia but i don't feel comfortable writing the genre since i'm afraid of messing up something so deeply ingrained in a foreign for me culture. so i decided to maintain 'the vibe' but write smth closer to me and have fun with my own cultural roots. but now...
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Hi Tempokai! I believe this is the place to order some good feedback and a nice roast? Please, go for it! The Scum Warlord Stabbed Me In The Back
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    Is this chapter 1 good enough?

    hi! the first major thing - my attention span is terrible and i don’t even care much for such stories, but i finished your first chapter in one breath. so if you take me as a blueprint for your average terrible reader - you did the job, i stayed till the end. the pace of the narration, the...
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    Looking for feedback on BL novel 'The Scum Warlord Stabbed Me In The Back'

    Hi everyone! I would appreciate any kind of feedback on my newly published BL novel. Characters, plot, whether it's 'hookable' enough, or any other thing you want to highlight. I'm mostly a character-driven author, so I tried to create memorable and, hopefully, lovable characters that will...
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