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I'm not a massive fan of seafood. -1 star. You need to swim to navigate the ocean, or use a vehicle. -1 star. The ocean washes up seaweed on beaches and it often smells terrible. -1 star. The ocean is outside. - 1 star. Overall I guess I'd rate it 1 star.

Jade Beauty

It's crazy how much mistaking the gender of the protagonist affects reading a synopsis. I've had at least three occasions where I've read a synopsis thinking "oh, this feels like a funny, unique and interesting story concept" only to start the first chapter, realise the protagonist is female...

I think the end is probably the very first thing I actually planned out in my current story. Not that it's fully planned out, but I have the major events thought out. I would want the beginning, end, and a "generic middle" of a story to be planned out before I start to write. Though if I were...

As nice as it sounds to say that the journey itself is the important part, I have to disagree. Those who do think this way are just thinking too literally about the concept of the 'destination'. The reason that the journey often feels important is because of some form of growth or experience...

To be honest, my main concern isn't the wildlife but the other people. I'm not sure what "best" means here, but I'd assume it means fitness/survival skill rather than morals. With that said, I feel like a small group containing myself and four other people who know they only have to work...

Consider the infinite sequence created by taking the positive integers and raising them to the power of negative one. Despite the fact that this sequence tends towards zero, the summation of all these term is non-finite.

I wouldn't classify it as one myself, since I'd feel like it's not a litrpg-world, so it wouldn't have the litrpg worldbuilding, whatever that is. But I'm probably not the target audience of that story so my opinion on the matter is irrelevant.

Please do. I've been made aware that the first chapter is somewhat exposition-heavy, and I'm planning on cutting out a few paragraphs on information if necessary. I don't know if this is too much to ask, but if possible, I'd like feedback on what paragraphs feel boring to read through.

I ended up judging by both content and prose. the "as well men ask what they think of stone" definitely deducted a few marks, but even if that sentence was replaced with something nicer on the eyes, I still think the content of the crumbling stone is better than war being described as the...

I'm gonna guess that . Oh well. I got it wrong.