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I had a dream that I made a new account to write a story, and Tony transferred the story to this account and said, "stop making new alts."

Well, use action tags and dialogue tags (said, asked, etc) as needed by the narrative.

One thing about tags, readers don't remember your character's identity or mannerisms as much as you. If we stop reading and come back...

That's only possible if the reader recognizes the characters after reading a few chapters (especially the character introductions). But...

It's a balancing act. One can certainly go overboard with lips curling, words being "growled", eyebrows being described all the time...

Don't need no stinkin' "SAID!" Whoever started the rumor that the word 'Said' is invisible to the reader, is a Lying Liar that Lies. I...

I love when authors use said or asked.

None of the kids understood half those words you said.

I have been an active gamer since I was 3 as well. That would make it almost 25 years.

There are only three rules. Witch hat, witchpire, and pink.

No, just put a really big [HAT]. People can't resist witch hats.

I don't know why you think that... I thought your writing was good, at least based on the few chapters I read earlier.

I followed El tips to make my narrative quality average, easier to understand and intentionally create MC who think everyone else is a...

The point is, don't go to a fast food restaurant expecting a Michelin dinner.

Ask @Story_Marc or @zachycards They make youtube videos