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    Splitting Chapters?

    Honestly I don't really get why small chapters are such an issue if people can just press the next chapter button. Large chapter on the other hand... With the attention span people have, most can barely read past 2k words I'd guess. So splitting makes sense. But I also think that each chapter...
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    Question regarding; 'hard to stomach' scenes.

    Never censor yourself unless you want to hate your own story. No matter what we write, there'll be people loving and conversely hating it. Can't be helped really. The best we can do is to tag it properly.
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    Zombie physics question...?

    I agree with your assessment. The smell is of the utmost importance because even in the movies, the zombies can usually locate their targets from kilometers away. Though I think their other senses should be weak. Hearing and vision should be nerfed compared to humans because zombies are 'rotten...
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    Feedback Request

    AI assistance is whatever but this seems completely generated. Still baffles me how uncaring people are. The problem is not the morals by themselves but the lack of any distinguishing factors. So, if a book is just like any other, how is it supposed to attain a unique audience of its own? If it...
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    Curing a harem member's vampirism...?

    It's an interesting notion. I'd say make mc offer it to her after hiding for a certain while before guilt attacks him. But then the love interest says 'no, I want to be with you forever.' Maybe add a side effect to the cure. That instead of drinking blood they now have to serve for whoever gives...
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