Recent content by konza

  1. konza

    Free feedback thread.

    While it is a word salad, as you have said, it is much appreciated. First off, I'd like to say that I agree with you. The earlier chapters of the novel were plagued with these issues due to, first and foremost, my inexperience as a writer. As an example, when I started writing the dialogue for...
  2. konza

    Story synopsis improvement and feedback

    Well, pretty much yeah, and wanted to hear different opinions on it as well.
  3. konza

    Favorite quotes from your own works

    This one gets 6/10 on the wittiness scale (average) and 1/10 on the edginess scale. Maybe I should replace the edginess scale with the funny scale?
  4. konza

    Favorite quotes from your own works

    Gotta ask, what genre is this? Seems interesting! Giving you 10/10 for the wittiness, because amogus. On the edginess scale, that last one takes the cake, 9/10. This one I like a lot, 10/10 for the wittiness, and 5/10 for the edginess, cause I just find it funny :P
  5. konza

    Favorite quotes from your own works

    Hello! I was just reviewing some of my past work and in the midst of it, I wondered: "Are there any actually good quotes that I came up with?" The answer was a resounding no. There were some good quotes, but basically all of them were inspired partially or fully by other quotes. I guess I'm...
  6. konza

    Story synopsis improvement and feedback

    As stated in the title, I'd like some help. My current synopsis just doesn't convey everything that the book has to offer, but I also don't want to spoil anything. The synopsis is also a tad generic to me, as I always sucked at giving summaries. I am open to suggestions and feedback on the...
  7. konza

    What media inspired your work?

    After reading many novels, I had an illusion that I could fix the things I disliked, and bring something new to the table. And then I realized that being an author is not that easy at all.
  8. konza

    Free feedback thread.

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/546183/rise-of-the-looper/ You can reply in the thread.
Top