Recent content by Kinni

Okay, so first of all: Thank you for the detailed feedback. The part about the descriptions in particular is definitely something I'll try to work on in the future. So, the little girl thing: It's not like that's an ideal form. I guess I wasn't clear enough in the chapter, but the idea is that...

I would like to ask for some feedback on my story. Ascendance of the Big Sister Monster Tamer

I would like to ask for some feedback on my story: Ascendance of the Big Sister Monster Tamer

I would like to get some feedback on my story. It can be in this thread. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/669374/ascendance-of-the-big-sister-monster-tamer/

And here is my first chapter: Elise and the Transcendents.