Well, I showed what people said here to my editor friend and she quit... and my best friend might be too busy to help me beta read, so I guess I will be going at this all solo now maybe except for my old friend Google for research lmao! So chapter 2 onwards, it will be unedited so possibly with...
Okay, I will go fix it.
I just came back from fixing it, oh dear, I didn't know it was like that. I thought it was just how the site space things. Thanks! Now please enjoy :)
Thanks for that, I am actually trying to do something with the names... I want to go for a more unusual or weird name. I did have another one, Mitsuhiko but I asked around my friend group and like Hihiko won the vote so I decided to go with that name. Even my mom choose Hihiko lol. Should I...
https://www.scribblehub.com/read/2230721-the-world-i-went-to/chapter/2230752/
There is the first chapter, I want feedbacks on it. My friend helped me edited the grammar. This is a story I have had in mind since I was in high school. I want to know what else I can improve on when writing the 2nd...