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Kazehiro
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I’ll Critique Your First Chapter’s Hook (Honest Feedback)
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O!! Please do me! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2277061/after-returning-from-another-world-my-sister-became-obsessed-with-me-rework/
Apr 9, 2026
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[CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3
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I can't stop because ... I will be there for everyone ... as we head toward our shared future, leaving the past behind.
Apr 9, 2026
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[CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3
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Didn't expect someone would call me that tittle too in here lmao😔☝️
Apr 9, 2026
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You have a good mindset, Karbiter. I'm a lich queen. Rosica is my cat.
Apr 9, 2026
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[CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3
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I can't serve to people what I think it's bad, and I can't think what I made is good or bad, unless there's someone want to taste it...
Apr 9, 2026
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Sons of Solo. There are two of them: That's rare. Most people don't bother fixing anything and is just asking for validation.
Apr 9, 2026
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[CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3
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Could you also do mine please? It's an early story (10 chapter)...
Apr 9, 2026
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Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open]
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I don't know if you would read an early that starts the begining of story or not. But If you do, could you also do my story ...
Apr 9, 2026
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[Riview Request] I just have been reworked my old novel, Did anyone want to give me riview about the progress?
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It is, I guess you are right, i'm at the point of asking myself "Did I do everything right?" Thanks so much for this feedback, you know...
Apr 9, 2026
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I don't think he need our help. He have already written four books before and I see no major issues with this one. I believe he has...
Apr 9, 2026
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I just read the synopsis and skimmed through chapter 1. My impression is that the synopsis is excellent. You transformed a (boring)...
Apr 9, 2026
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Better? That's very vague. Tell me what you want to improve. Formatting? The prose? Structure? Or do you want others to point out which...
Apr 9, 2026
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This thread should be placed in the feedback section. @Zinless You have a new patient who needs to be moved to another room. Sorry for...
Apr 9, 2026
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I see I didn't point out about which aspect yet. What I needed is the most weakest point about the plot, the pacing I'm building and...
Apr 9, 2026
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Here, I’d like to ask for help reviewing the early version of this story while it’s still in its beginning stages. I want to make this...
Apr 9, 2026
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