Hi guys, I am quite unsure if i should continue this novel. Please give it a read and let me know with some feedback.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2007380/silent-bloom/
well i would like to hear some feedback about the actual light novel instead of the word count because the volume is going to contain alot more other than the 16 chapters i was just told not to disclose it
Hi guys I am publishing my light novels first volume into paperback and before that i would love some feedback.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2007380/silent-bloom/
If you are interested in LitRPG have a go at my new light novel. Would appreciate some feedback with it.
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2007380/silent-bloom/
Thank you Fairemont for your feedback, you don't understand how much i do appreciate it. I will take in the accounts with what you said about the mc's name. The reason it was first name/last name was due to the fact it was an English transcript many publishers want it to be like that. This is...
Here is my light novel, quite interesting and delves into a genre which not a lot of people have created. Soul system. Yes just like soul games, however has my own touch to it which is that it is more modernized and based one emotions. You will have a real kick out of it. Love some feedback too...
i appreciate the feedback but that was purposefully done, the main plot of the story of to why he is emotionless is still yet to come so i recommend you to continue reading because u will enjoy it. This is also my first ever writing so i do appreciate the patience i am still learning.
Hi guys can you please review my light novel and tell me how u think it has 4 chapter currently and i am working on a cover art which i will release tomorrow evening