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    looking for some serious critique, especially on my writing style and a key fight scene in Chapter 5

    Got it. I’ll mark my work as AI-edited going forward. I’ll avoid using AI for edits in future. I’ll focus on making dialogue less cliché and smoothing scene transitions. Appreciate your patience Understood. I'll add a clear disclaimer like that. Thanks for helping me fix mistake
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    looking for some serious critique, especially on my writing style and a key fight scene in Chapter 5

    Thanks for pointing this out. used AI to fix grammar and awkward phrasing. "hit the ground like a ragdoll, skidding across the hardened" this part i saw same where and I wrote " He thrown to the ground like ragdoll, Slip across the gym floor" since English isn’t my first language i use ai to...
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    looking for some serious critique, especially on my writing style and a key fight scene in Chapter 5

    Thank you for your feedback. English isn’t my first language, and I used AI tools to help refine grammar and phrasing , If not it's too robotic .I’m still learning, and my intention was to improve readability, not mislead anyone. I apologize if this caused frustration or felt disrespectful.
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    looking for some serious critique, especially on my writing style and a key fight scene in Chapter 5

    I'm looking for some serious critique, especially on my writing style and a key fight scene in Chapter 5 of my webnovel. Genre: sci-fi Title: Beyond Awakening Link: Beyond Awakening / https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1533823/beyond-awakening/ Does my prose flow well, or is it clunky and hard...
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    [AIvsHuman] I Shall 1v1 Grok And Evaluate New Writers

    Hi! Could you please review the first chapter of my webnovel? Here's the link: CHAPTER 1: THE WEAKEST LINK [Beyond Awakening] https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1533823-beyond-awakening/chapter/1535789/
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