Wow! That is a generous offer and I would be thrilled to have an opinion on my first chapter! I hope you're not full yet ;)
This is my story right here: Somewhere we Belong
It's about two brothers trying to find their way in a hostile world, but I'll let you discover it for yourself, if you...
Hey! Great concept! :3
Here's my piece of the cake: Somewhere we Belong
It's a story about two brothers seeking a place where they are accepted and can live in peace, while there are others in the world seeking to kill them.
Mostly an organization that wants to cleanse the world of all beings that are neither human nor ordinary animal. So all intelligent non-humans for example.