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K_Nishi reacted to Bobple's post in the thread How did you feel at the end of your first story? with
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Today I completed my first story. I started it in 2023 and now it is done. And safe to say, I feel weird. Sad, happy, sad, happy. Mix... -
K_Nishi reacted to Lmae's post in the thread Looking for an assessment on the first 5 chapters? with Like.
I modified the prologue and want to see if the story flows better and if the hook is clear. Also what do you think about the mc...
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Yes, you need to set limits in the form of cost, cooldown, and even backslash if skill is overused. It helps make your characters more...
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It's just an example, dude.
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K_Nishi replied to the thread Litrpg skill system.Since the genre is LitRPG, the best approach is to ensure that readers can enjoy the story in a stress-free way and feel a sense of...
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K_Nishi reacted to MFontana's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with Like.
Thank you both for the input. The actions are coming soon enough, and I do have a clear mental picture of how to incorporate them into...
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K_Nishi replied to the thread What do you think of this character introduction?.The villainous intent definitely comes through, so your direction is clear. At the moment, though, he feels somewhat archetypal — a...
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K_Nishi reacted to MFontana's post in the thread What do you think of this character introduction? with Like.
I figured that was easy to infer with the mention of his smirk, but a bit more clarity probably couldn't hurt. I appreciate the input...
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K_Nishi replied to the thread What do you think of this character introduction?.The operatic mask works visually, but I wonder if some readers might momentarily struggle to picture how much of his face is visible...
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K_Nishi reacted to MFontana's post in the thread How do you write an engaging main character that makes you want to read the rest of his story? with Like.
It's a matter of reader preference. Personally, I'd say you achieve that by not trying to please everyone first. There's always going to...
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K_Nishi reacted to Eldoria's post in the thread How do you write an engaging main character that makes you want to read the rest of his story? with Like.
Dude... "excited" is too relative and general. An OP protagonist might excite readers who are bored with slow development. Conversely...
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K_Nishi replied to the thread How can i write believable relationships..Trust isn’t shown through grand confessions, but through small choices at the dinner table. For example, even in the middle of a fight...
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K_Nishi reacted to Lmae's post in the thread How do you write an engaging main character that makes you want to read the rest of his story? with Like.
The first five chapters of my book is the mc trying his best to help others but losing because he is outmatched. The middle of the book...
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K_Nishi reacted to Conqueror_Quack's post in the thread How can i write believable relationships. with Like.
Hannibal Lecter must be an angel sent by God then.
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K_Nishi reacted to TinaMigarlo's post in the thread How can i write believable relationships. with Like.
is that one of those "insider things". I know you "signal" professionals that you are part of the scene, when you JC a character. if the...