Juia_Darkcrest's latest activity
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Juia_Darkcrest replied to the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it?.Hahaha Yeah, from my perspective, I thought it was some teenage squire or something sneaking up on the dude with a hammer and... -
Juia_Darkcrest replied to the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it?.I don't feel there are really any stakes here at all... Dude snuck up behind him and wacked him on the head, then finished him off...
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Juia_Darkcrest reacted to Wamba2K's post in the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it? with
Love.
In my opinion, it feels flat. I have trouble keeping up with who's perspective the scene is supposed to be following, but that may be... -
Juia_Darkcrest reacted to TheIcMan's post in the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it? with Like.
Yeah you're both lacking and overdoing it. You're lacking the actual tension and scene of the fight, and you're overdoing everything...
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Juia_Darkcrest reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it? with Like.
Oh, i'm not talking about the writing approach actually. Well, you said Agnar is top 25 strongest swordsmaster right? He literally lose...
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Juia_Darkcrest reacted to Rolanov's post in the thread Well, I might start posting here after all. with Haha.
Uncle, I only want to help moving your package to safe place! :blob_no: :blob_no:
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Juia_Darkcrest reacted to CharlesEBrown's post in the thread Well, I might start posting here after all. with Haha.
40? Young whippersnapper. Get offa my lawn... :biggrin_s:
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Juia_Darkcrest replied to the thread Well, I might start posting here after all..LOL Hardly the only one. Several have a decade or two on me =)
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Juia_Darkcrest reacted to Feudyn's post in the thread Writing How to control "deviations" from your overall plot? (without deceiving readers) with Like.
As of at the moment, the next chapter that I am going to be publishing will pretty much be where the sex scene is. No fade-to-black in...
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Juia_Darkcrest replied to the thread Writing How to control "deviations" from your overall plot? (without deceiving readers).Yeah You will be fine. I consider myself fairly light for smut for a smut author. I have 18 R-18 chapters out of nearly 160, and most...
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Juia_Darkcrest commented on Conqueror_Quack's profile post.*angry old duck shaking his cane at the clouds noises*
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Get off mah lawn!
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sure, people in their 40s having accomplishments/money reserve build with full access to tech and internet won't ever use sns or play...
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Juia_Darkcrest commented on Conqueror_Quack's profile post.LOL... fair enough. I retired and decided to try my hand at writing. I just use the forums to chat once in a while. I have been in and...
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That doesn't make it better!