Recent content by Juan19977

Thanks for the feedback. Now, I have a clearer understanding of the things to work on.

Alright. I'm throwing my hat in the ring. I'm a new writer. Rip me to shreds. Heads up, chapter 3 was my first attempt at a lore drop. I think it's my toughest chapter to get through. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422812/fate-is-a-bith/

Hi. Would you be willing to check out my story? I'm new to writing, and I would appreciate any feedback on it. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422812/fate-is-a-bith/