Recent content by jrise98

Thank you for the feedback! I have had similar thoughts once I reread what I wrote for my first chapters. When I write them, I was scared on being too shallow and fast paced with my writing and certainly overcorrected into dragging things out. Upon getting past chapter nine and ten in my drafts...

I would love to get a little feedback on my novel! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/513797/the-dream-carrier-an-american-isekai/ If you can to it, I'd appreciate the effort to help a new writer out.

Here is my story that I'm trying to get out rather aggressively (and probably annoyingly as well) for reviews. It is an Action Adventure Fantasy type of story. As I said in the thread I started yesterday, I encourage brutality, it's not great at the moment and I want to improve my creation...

Here is my story that I'm trying to get out rather aggressively (and probably annoyingly as well) for reviews. It is an Action Adventure Fantasy type of story. Not much romance at all. No smut. As I said in the thread I started yesterday, I encourage brutality, it's not great at the moment and I...

My story is very low on romance. Is that good thing or will it be rather damaging to it? I know it is almost a requirement on Wattpad but I was hoping that scribblehub would be more receptive

Brand New Writer. I've written a 123k book over the last six weeks. It's an action fantasy novel and it's not very good. However I want to make it better. The first six chapters are posted here: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/513797/the-dream-carrier-an-american-isekai/ Please be as brutal...