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I’ve had a few ‘This is good!’ comments, but ultimately, the best feedback I’ve ever received was on a short story I wrote, where my...

yet, they can be... filled with insidious deceit trapped in the throes of deep infatuation because -ly words are overdone.

I'm a big fan of old, obsolete or archaic words like rivelled or wan. I think they're fun. Right now, I'm having an especially good time...

I try to pick something central to the chapter that is different from what the chapter's actually about. In my most recent chapters, The...

That's mostly just what it's like these days. Most grammar tools have tried to integrate LLMs into their services even though I have yet...

I don't have much to say--it's really difficult to give any kind of helpful feedback on an outline, especially one for a single chapter...

I feel like each time I delve into more sensitive topics in my stories, there will be SOMEBODY out there who thinks I like what I'm...

When I first really got into the weeds, I wrote whatever I wanted, regardless of audience or purpose. It took a while to realize I was...

:meowsip: Using names is the most effective method that I have found. Sometimes clarity is crucial.

This is something I wish SH had more options for. I know it’s a niche feature that likely makes an unnecessary mess of chapter indexing...

Hey all, I'm sure this has been discussed but how would you personally divide a story into volumes/books on SH? Like, maybe have a...

I haven’t been able to find that kind of thing myself just yet either. I’d be happy to help start or join a fantasy authors’ writer’s...

I want to follow up with something slightly different. Beyond readership, I’m also looking to connect with other fantasy authors who...

I think the description you have in the first passage is the strongest. I'd cut out the details about the clasp and his pommel, but it's...