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Don't really enjoy fanfiction... feels.... claustrophobic... Like, there is an invisible prison you can never get out of.

I don't get the feeling of panic. It feels satirical or comedic more than dreadful or panic inducing.

All the time. Whether or not I actually go back and rewrite it depends on when I have the idea. If it's while I'm still writing the...

I think it's pretty cool

Your sentences aren’t necessarily too long-winded (they’re maybe half the length of mine on average), it’s that you use the same...

First of all thank you for reading my story. From your observation it seems that my large winded sentences are hard for readers to...

There's some good advice here regarding how to structure a synopsis, but not a lot about how to write one. Something that I think is...

Well, frankly, your synopsis feels cold because it positions the reader as a neutral observer. A good synopsis is one that makes the...

It depends on what function your synopsis should perform. It can introduce the world so that the first chapters don't seem too...

On a micro-level, you start a lot of your sentences with participle phrases. While not the worst thing in the world, I'd go back and see...

There's not a lot of meat here. Your chapter is almost exclusively dialogue, with bits of really bare prose here and there. On top of...

I believe that this site is full of creative people, therefore I stand with the statement that story covers should also be creative, not...

You kind of lost me here, with the way you've politicized AI usage. At risk of getting into a political debate (not my intent), fascist...

First person can be really tough, especially for new writers. There's a tendency to be very...quipy? I suppose? Meta? Often, I find...

Congrats! It's always a great feeling when you actually start to get somewhere with your ideas. It makes the whole thing feel more real.